martes, 22 de marzo de 2011

Yesterday, Miranda stole a bank. She did it with the help of her friend Aylén. They came into the bank at night. It was a cold and dark night. An old woman heard the danger sound and called the police. That's why the crime wasn't succesful. Aylén and Miranda tried to escape, but in the dark of the night, they didn't see a big stone in the way, so Aylén fell down and broke her leg. Miranda stoped running and helped her and that was the moment when the police caught them. Now they're in prision (waiting for die).

Algunas correcciones y seguro es SUCCESFULLY como a mí me gustaba. Parte final agregada, etc. Clase de inglés:)

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